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I got an angel on my shoulder
Telling me of things I need to hear
I got an angel on my shoulder
Telling me of things I shouldn’t fear

I got a devil on my shoulder
Telling me of things I shouldn’t hear
I got a devil on my shoulder
Telling me of things I need to fear

I got an angel on my shoulder
He's a compliment to who I am
I got an angel on my shoulder
When I grow tired he helps me to stand

I got a devil on my shoulder
He's a contradiction to this man!
I got a devil on my shoulder
Who I do not understand
©2006-2009 ~brownstone702
:iconbrownstone702:

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One of them poems that just poped into my head while trottin along through my day. It's subject pretty much the choice of light over darkness.

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:iconharkanwal:
Well very natural flow to the poem and beautiful way of putting the god and bad in us in prespective.
:iconbrownstone702:
right on thanks for the comlament man:)

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The future is unknow untill the hand of time has written it in stone
:iconbrokenromantic:
Very nice:) I agree with !harkanwal

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-`If you read this line, remember not the hand that wrote it. Remember only the verse, song maker's cry, the one without tears|
-`Remember Me|
:iconbrownstone702:
why thank you. its all about choices. weather we listen to our hate and resentment and let that drive us or we listen to the good side of ourselves. i've listed to the bad for a long time, then it was too much and desided to be morel iek the old me and do whats right. lifes alot better that way. outside the veil of flies

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The future is unknow untill the hand of time has written it in stone
:iconbrokenromantic:
YES!! I know what you mean!!!:D

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-`If you read this line, remember not the hand that wrote it. Remember only the verse, song maker's cry, the one without tears|
-`Remember Me|
:iconmitchellp:
6th line from the bottom you forgot the "er" part on shoulder.

I like it the eternal battle between good and evil, right and wrong NICELY DONE!! :clap:

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If all your friends were named Cliff would you jump off them??
:iconbrownstone702:
Thanks for the add and the comment;) i'll have to fix that er haha.

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The future is unknow untill the hand of time has written it in stone
:iconmitchellp:
Your welcome lol

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If all your friends were named Cliff would you jump off them??

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